p4

I think i needed to speak slower and describe the plot line in a lot more detail, and to explain the episode break down in more detail as well. The client did not really understand what my show was about so this proves that i need to give more detail. I also need to include my supporting documents in my next pitch because I did not include them in this pitch and it may have helped my client give better feedback and have better understanding towards my idea. I said that my target audience was 16-24 however the client disagreed with me and says it is older which no i agree with